Masahiro is trying to dad properly for, uh, the first time ever. I’m not sure how I’d rate his efforts.
(also yes hi this is the page that made me start crying when I drew it, because I am a bundle of too many feelings about fictional characters)
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OMG Masahiro’s face in panel 3 🙁
;_; I knooooow! This page broke my fragile little heart while I was working on it.
These aren’t tears welling in my eyes, they’re *special* tears reserved to moments like this.
I think you got the facial emotions super well done on this page, and you really did show their characteristics! I can see the person who at first just seemed like a grumpy-and-awesome dude really isn’t so simple! His charcater is developing so beautifully! I can also see why Akane is so bent on staying with him! That third panel is placed so greatly, and the shape and stuff makes an awesome impact on the reader! (I’m not sure if for everyone, but I did for me!) The gradient is also well done for mood! Awesome job!!
Thank you so much! <3
I'm really happy that the facial expressions are working well on this page - it's such an important scene, and I have to struggle with partial face-blindness, which WILL cause me to screw up regularly, so to hear that the faces are working is lovely. <3
And, just, you know, <3 <3 <3 <3